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Old 11-07-2009, 05:50 AM   #1
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a lil sumtin off the top of my head




i kno if i die
i wouldnt be missed
i would just be remembered as
another fuck on your list
i would just be remembered as
the bitch
i would just be remembered as
the daughter who always fought back
i would be remembered as
the girl you always hated
i would be remembered as
the girl who never took shit from anyone
i would be remembered as
the girl who always faked the smile on her face
i would be remembered as
the girl u never took seriously
i would be remembered as
the girl who was always in her own little world
i would be remembered as
the girl who never acted right
i would be remembered as
the girl whos phycologically unstable
the one that her parents fucked up with all the crap they gave her
leaving her of uncappable of loving herself
cause of all the crap they gave her
killing her self esteem
wen she hardly had n e
makin her feel worthless
when she was doin the best she could
makin her feel that anything she did was never enough
and never will be enough
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Old 11-07-2009, 08:34 PM   #2
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that is a firme poem but also very hard to read. Reminds me much of how i used to feel when i was young and a fuck up. Keep your head up
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Old 11-10-2009, 08:18 PM   #3
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Alot of people have gone through that in their life.. I used to be called a fuck up but us FUCK UPs turn out better than those who always did what they're told!! Hang in there, you'll be alright!!
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Old 11-10-2009, 08:45 PM   #4
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good poem
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Old 11-11-2009, 02:14 AM   #5
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Originally Posted by Heavyheartedsoul81 View Post
Alot of people have gone through that in their life.. I used to be called a fuck up but us FUCK UPs turn out better than those who always did what they're told!! Hang in there, you'll be alright!!
hey you know what, i agree. good one heaveheartedsoul.
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Old 11-13-2009, 05:59 AM   #6
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thnx for the feedback i apreciate it
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Old 11-13-2009, 02:38 PM   #7
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YOU POEM ALMOST BROUGHT ME TO TEARS ,
IVE FELT LIKE THAT TOO MANY TIMEZ TOO IT MADE ME THINK BACK ON MY CHILDHOOD AND I FELL YOU ON THE THINGS YOU SAY
KEEP WRITTING I FEEL I COULD RELATE TO YOU IN THE FEELINGS YOU FEEL
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