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Old 04-19-2009, 06:50 AM   #1
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HEY GENTE,HERE'S MY NEW STORY..ENJ0Y!!


[JASLENE-Is 16 years old,about 5'6,has light brown skin,clear brown eyes with long eyelashes.She has long black wavy hair.Has a dimple on her right cheek,and a beautiful smile.She's beautiful and has a nice body,curves in all the right places.Has vatos all on her shit but dosen't date much.Has a twin brother named Jeremiah,pero he's at juvi.She also has her tounge,lower left lip,and nose peirced]

At her house...
Jaslene sat on her couch watching her dad help his soon to be wife and her daughter move into their house.Jaslene maddogged both of them everytime they would walk by her.She didn't like the fact that her dad was moving them in,she hated them with so much hate.She just couldn't except the fact that another women was coming into the house as the new "Mom"..You see her mom passed away when Jaslene was 12 years old,she was shot during a drive by and the fucked up shit was that she was 6 months pregnant...they both didn't make it.It devastated her dad,and now he was actually happy again so she couldn't do anything to keep her soon to be step mom away....

Lucia::Hello Jaslene.

[Lucia-Is 29 years old,5'8.has light skin and brown eyes.Kinda chunky but is pretty.Is a straight up bitch to Jaslene,and is Abigail's mom.]

Jaslene maddogged her once more and stood up to walk away.

Voice::Stop being so rude bitch.My mom said hi.

Jaslene turned to find Abigail standing infront of her.

[Abigail-Is 15 years old,5'4,light skinned with blue eyes.Has light brown hair with blond highlights.Has braces and an okay body.She's pretty but is a straight up hoodrata.Mixed with mexican and white]

Jaslene:: Don't fucken talk to me like that.
Abigail::I talk to you how ever I fucken want to,okay bitch.

Jaslene was about to swing at her when her dad walked in...

David::What's goin on?

[David-32 years old,5"11,brown skin,with long eyelashes.Has a small fade.Has a dimple on his right cheek(Jaslene has the same smile)Good looking for his age.Nice body,tattoes all over it.And has a ta of Jaslene's mom on his right hand.She was beautiful,Jaslene looked a lot like her]

Abigail:: Jaslene was gonna hit me*went and hugged him*And I didn't do nada to her.I just said Hi.
David:: Is this true?
Jaslene:: Fuck no!She talked shit to me first.
Abigail:: No I didn't..I swear daddy,I didn't do nothing to her*had tears in her eyes*
Jaslene:: Don't fucken call him that,he's my dad bitch.Not yours.
Lucia:: Stop it Jaslene,he's her dad now too.
Jaslene:: Stay the fuck out of this fucken intrusa.
Lucia:: How dare you!
David:: Jaslene stop disrespecting them!
Jaslene::I 'm just saying the truth apa.
David:: Sabes que,just go to your room.I don't want to hear you right now.
Jaslene::*hurt*What?Are you taking their side??
David::I'm not taking anyones side.Just go to your room while we keep moving in things*turned to walk away*

Jaslene stared at him hurt then turned to look at Abigail and Lucia who were smiling at eachother.She was so fucken mad that he was on their side then with his own daughter.She went nto her room and slammed the door.She hated the fact that she had to live with them.She walked over to her drawer and grabbed a picture of her mom.Sh stared at it as she sat on her bed.

Jaslene:: Mami...*tears came out*I miss you so much...why did you have to leave me?I feel so alone,my dad isn't the same with me anymore.Everything revolves around Abigail and Lucia...he forgets that he has me.Me!He would rather be with them than with me,his own daughter.I'm so alone mom...he has them...and me??*cried*I don't have anyone...not even Jeremiah.I need you so much mami..I wish you where here with me..

Jaslene cried and let all her anger out that way.She ended up crying herself to sleep...


S0 QUE PiENSAN???
SH0ULD i KEEP G0iNG 0R N0??
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Old 04-19-2009, 01:52 PM   #2
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it's good so far chick keep goin...she should grab all thier shyt and throw it outside to the dogs haha i hate dumb bitches like that
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Old 04-19-2009, 05:00 PM   #3
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it's good so far , pu3s k33p it kumin.
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Old 04-20-2009, 12:46 AM   #4
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It's gooood!
It's so messed up how that can even happen...I hope that Lucia and abigail die soon..

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Old 04-21-2009, 03:51 AM   #5
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iM GLAD Y0U LiKED iT...HERE'S M0RE...

The next morning Jaslene woke up around 10 in the morning.She got up and took a shower.After that she got her hair in a bun and put on jean shorts a white muscle shirt and her white chanclas.She didn't do her make up.She really didn't need it.She had that natural look.She walked into the kitchen to eat come breakfast when she bumped into Lucia.

Lucia:: Finally your up.
Jaslene:: *rolled her eyes*Where's my dad?
Lucia:: He took our daughter to the mall.Que cute huh?*smiled*

Jaslene maddogged her.

Lucia:: Don't look at me like that you little bitch.
Jaslene::Fuck you.
Lucia:: *laughed*Respect me Jaslene,I'm your new mom.
Jaslene:: *looked at her up and down*Bitch please,just shut the fuck up.
Lucia:: Maldita esquincla,what did I just tell you?
Jaslene:: *laughed*O god,me respect you...never puta.You can't make a hoe into a housewife.And try as you might that's what you'll always be,you fucken used up bitch.
Lucia:: Pinche mal nacida.But you know what?I couuld care less what you say,because your dad loves me no matter what you say.And if he wants me here...I'm staying*got close to her*and I'm not letting you intimidate me Jaslene.And you know why?Because I'm plannig to stay for a very very long time,and believe me...I'll get rid of you sooner or later.So me and my daughter and David could be a happy family without you and your fucken lowlife brother.
Jaslene:: Don't you dare talk about my brother you old bitch!*got closer to her and was all up in her face*
Lucia:: Ay Jaslene,mejor largate de mi vista pendeja.Me enfadas*turned away*
Jaslene:: Your gonna regret messing with me*turned and walked out her house slamming the door behind her*

She was so fucken pissed,she needed someone to talk to.But first she had to eat she was hungry as fuck.As she walked over to McDonalds she decided to go to Guera's house.When she got to Mcd's she ordered something for her and for Guera.She new that bitch would want some anyway.After she left to Guera's...when she got there she walked into Guera's room.The bitch as doing sumthing in her closet so she sat on her bed getting the food out.Just then Guera turned around.

Jaslene:: Boo bitch!!!
Guera:: What the fuck Jaslene,you scared the shit out of me!

[[CRiSTiNA A.K.A GUERA-Is 16 years old,5'6,has light brown skin,brown eyes,curly hair dyed caramel.Really nice eyebrows that she has tatted on.Really pretty.Has small breast but has an ass that makes her have a nice body.Has a tat on wrist that says her nickname.She's a chola.]

Jaslene:: *laughed*I though nothing scared you chola.
Guera:: Shut up.Que haces aqui anyway?
Jaslene:: Fuck que bienvenida eres?After I even brought you food,que gacho Guera.Fuck!
Guera:: Dispensa mija.So what's up?
Jaslene:: Nada,just had to get away from mi house.Serio foo I can't stand the fact que they moved in already.
Guera:: Que paso?
Jaslene:: Mas bien que no a pasado.I already got into it with them...y como se mira mi jefe is all backing them up than me*looked down*
Guera:: That's fucked up mija,but you know you have me,hermanita.
Jaslene:: Yea..
Guera:: Aver come on let's eat.I'm hungry...

S0RRY iT'S S00 SH0RT,i HAVE T0 D0 S0METHiNG...i'LL TRY T0 WRiTE M0RE LATER 0N,BUT iF i D0N'T,THEN iLL WRiTE M0RE T0M0RR0W
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Old 04-24-2009, 12:17 AM   #6
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damn i hate those people!!
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Old 04-24-2009, 12:26 AM   #7
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i like it im glad this isnt a boring story like most now in these days keep it coming
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Old 04-24-2009, 01:19 AM   #8
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keep it coming
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Old 04-24-2009, 01:41 AM   #9
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i likee it
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Old 04-24-2009, 02:05 AM   #10
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