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Old 05-05-2009, 10:39 AM   #21
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New reader...Keep it comin.. i like itt
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Old 05-06-2009, 01:30 AM   #23
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THANX 0R THE C0MMENTS,iM GLAD Y0U ALL LiKE iT!!

While they were driving Guera looked at Jaslene.Jaslene had tears in her eyes because she was so mad.

Guera:: Are you ok?
Jaslene:: *wiped the tears away*Yea,I'm fine.
Guera:: Damn that's some fucked up shit your dad did.Serio..
Jaslene:: I told you,he never listens to what I gotta say.Para decirte que we haven't seen Jeremiah in a long as time.
Guera:: Y eso?
Jaslene:: He got into it wit my dad,talking shit about Lucia.So my dad hit him defending her...it was so crazy...My dad won't go see him after that.
Guera:: That's fucked up.I never thought your dad would ever do that.
Jaslene:: He changed...alot.
Guera:: Damn...but look mija.We are almost at the spot.So en un rato i'll help you forget the pain.
Jaslene:: 0 right.
Guera:: Yup,yup.So mija you better turn that frown upside down.

Jaslene smiled at her,in lil to no time they arrived just like Guera said.Guera parked the car in the driveway and got out the car.Jaslene checked herself in the mirror and wiped her eyes clean.She then put on a lil more make-up,in the end she looked good as before.She got out the car and walked up to house with Guera.She took a look around her looking at all the faces.

Jaslene:: Guera,I don't know anybody here.
Guera:: That's the point.To meet new people.Now come on.

They both walked into the house del homie de Guera.She introduced Jaslene to so many people que in less than no time Jaslene had made some new friends and the bitch was drinking her pain away,just like Guera said..After an hour or two...They were standing around talking and drinking with some homegirls when Guera elbowed Jaslene.

Jaslene:: What?
Guera:: You see that vato right there?*pointed at a cute pelon with some loks on*
Jaslene:: What about him?*took a drink from her beer*
Guera:: That's Lucky.
Jaslene:: Lucky?Mmmm he looks good.
Guera:: Ey bitch he's off limits.
Jaslene:: *laughed*I know,I know...So que your not gonna go over there?
Guera:: *hesitated*Yea pero go with me yea?
Jaslene:: Fine,just wait..*walked to get another beer,then came back to her*There..now let's go.
Guera:: Jaslene,how many have you drank?
Jaslene:: What beers?
Guera:: Duh stupid.
Jaslene:: Like...*counted on her fingers*1,2,3,5..7
Guera:: Jaslene..
Jaslene:: *laughed*Like umm...7 or 8?But I'm not drunk,I'm just Tipsy.
Guera:: Sure,you know your ass is gone.
Jaslene:: No,not even.
Guera:: Como que no,you never drink.Obiously you are pendeja.
Jaslene:: Ay whatever,come on let's go with LUCKY*pulled her by the hand and walked over to him*

[[Lucky-19 years old,about 5'9.Has brown skin and brown eyee with long eyelashes.Pelon with dimples.Has a small beard.Nice body.Really koo,pero can be a bitch.Is a cholo and is really cute]

Lucky was looking at both of them come over to him.He smiled at them.Guera smiled at him.

Guera:: What's up Lucky?
Lucky:: Nada,just here kicking it..*checked her up and down*Damn mami you looking fucken good.What's your name?
Guera:: Don't you recognize me?
Lucky:: Nah mija,I would definetly know you If I did.

Guera laughed.Jaslene toda tipsy went to him.

Jaslene:: Es Guera.
Lucky:: *shocked*Guera??
Jaslene:: Did you not hear me??Duh!
Guera:: Shut up Jaslene!*pushed her*....Yea it's me.
Lucky:: Damn mija...you look...damn*licked his lips*
Guera:: So I guess you like my new look huh?
Lucky:: Simon que I do...pero you know que you looked good before too right?
Guera:: Tu cres?
Lucky:: Hell yea,you looked all firme mija.But I do gotta say I like this new look too babigirl*got close to her*

Jaslene:: *Interrupted them*Hello??I'm still here.
Guera:: 0..yea.Lucky this is my best homegirl for life Jaslene.Jassie this is...
Jaslene:: Lucky..yea I know I know...Ey I really gotta go pee.
Guera:: Jaslene...that's too much info.
Jaslene:: So what?*drank the rest of her beer*I gotta go.
Lucky:: *laughed*I like your homegirl Guera.She's funny.
Jaslene:: Funny?Apoco tengo cara de payaso to be funny o que?
Guera:: Jaslene,stop being rude.Aver come on I'll take you to the bathroom.
Jaslene:: Nah.nah.nah.I can go on my own*turned to walk away,then turned back around*Where is it?
Lucky:: *laughed*Down the hall,2nd door to your right.

Jaslene walked away tripping and shit.She walked to were the bathroom was and opened the door.As soon as she opened it she saw a vato taking a piss.She froze and her eyes widened.She then let out a gasp that made him turn around... lolz!!
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Old 05-06-2009, 03:09 AM   #24
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lmao hell naw jaslene and
guera are krazy exspecially jaslene lol but KEEP IT KOMIN!!
U SHOULD POST A LONGER ONE NEXT TIME
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lol thats hella funny
keep it comin this story iz firme
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Old 05-06-2009, 04:04 AM   #26
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i W0ULD P0ST M0RE BUT iM S000 LAZY,HAHA.
i'M GLAD Y0U LiKE THiS ST0RY.
AND i PR0MiSE T0M0RR0W iLL WRiTE A KiNDA L0NG P0ST!
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awww no post today plz i wanna know who it is....
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Old 05-06-2009, 06:08 AM   #28
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Lol Datz So Funni...Keep It Coming i Love It
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dats funny... keep it comin
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HERE'S M0RE JUST LiKE i PR0MiSED!

Jaslene gave out a gasp that made him turn around...He looked at her.Jaslene looked back at him with her eyes wide open.

Jaslene:: 0mg!I'm Sorr..*looked down at his dick,it was big*Wow...
Vato:: *Chuckled*Take a picture if you want mami.

Jaslene stared at him as he put it away.She then realized what she was doing.

Jaslene:: Sorry,I'm so sorry!

She turned quickly around and almost fell,pero he caught her before she did.

Vato:: You ok?
Jaslene:: Yea,umm.Go ahead finish up*walked out and closed the door behind her*

Thee vato laughed as he washed his hands.Jaslene meanwhile leaned by the wall and let out a small laugh.After a mn or 2 he opened up the door and came out.He looked around and saw Jaslene who was turned away drinking another beer.He tapped her lightly on the shoulder.Jaslene turned around and opened her eyes wide as soon as she saw him,she almost spit out the beer.He smiled at her.As soon as she turned to look at him,she could't resist but check him out.She was thinking to herself "Damn this vato is sexy as fuck!" He was a pelon with some beautiful gray green eyes.And had some thick lips.He had a nice smile.Had a nice body(so it looked)Had a small beard and a small mustage that made him look so ummm!He was wearing a a white polo shirt with a r0yal blue one under it.Black dickies,sagging of course.He had on some all white cortezes and a royal blue and white L.A hat.Jaslene couldn't help but droll over him.He noticed and he gave out a small chuckle that made her snap out of this wonderful view of a god.She looked up at him.

Vato:: I just wanted to let you know que..well you can go use it now.
Jaslene:: Use what?
Vato:: El baņo mija.
Jaslene:: For what?*the bitch was still in lala land*
Vato:: I don't know mija,what do people use the bathroom for?*laughed*
Jaslene:: Yea,right...

She felt so stupid.She just made a fool out of herself and to make it worst infront of a fineass mutha fucker.She looked away and walked into the bathroom closing the door behind her.She leaned on the door and hit he head onto it gently.

Jaslene:: Stupid,stupid.He was so sexy.Ugh!!

She rolled her eyes then went to go do her thang.After she was done she walked towards the mirror and looked at herself.She had make-up under her eyes,she just looked like a hot mess.She couldn't believe that's how that vato saw her!She turned on the faucet and started cleaning her face with the cold water.She took all the make-up off then dried her face with a towel.She then grabbed a scrunchie that was there and grabbed her hair into a ponytail.She was feeling better after she wet her face.She looked at herself in the mirror.She still looked good even after the make-up was off.She then opened the door slowly to see if the sexy vato was still there.He wasn't so she walked back to the living room.She looked around for Guera but she was nowhere in sight.Neither was Lucky....hmmm what a coincidence she tought.So she just sat on a chair and talked with some gente until she spotted a pelon looking at her from across the room.Her heart beat rapidly as she looked at him closely to see if it was the same one as before.To her dissapointment it wasn't.But this vato wasn't bad looking either.He looked at her moved his head up saying was up.She smiled at him.He then grabbed two beers and headed to her.He sat next to her.

Vato:: Was up mija?I would like to introduce myself to a beautiful hyna like yourself...I'm Temper*handed her a beer*
Jaslene:: *Giggled and took the beer*I'm Jaslene...
Temper:: It's a pleasure mija*grabbed her hand and kissed it which made Jaslene blush*May I?*looked at the seat next to her*
Jaslene:: Sure.

He sat next to her and stared at her.It made Jaslene blush un chingo.He was really fine.


[[Michael a.k.a Temper-18 years old,about 5'8.Brown skin with dark brown eyes and eyelashes.Had a nice body,both ears pierced.Has a small mustage,has his tounge pierced,fine as fuck.Could be kool,pero has a mean side]]

Jaslene:: Que tanto me miras?
Temper:: Am I?0 I'm sorry mija.It's just that,I got distracted with your beauty.

Jaslene laughed out loud.

Temper:: What's so funny mija?
Jaslene:: You really think imma believe that line?
Temper:: Why not?It's true.
Jaslene:: Nice try Temper*laughed*
Temper:: Ah I feel hurt now*grabbed his heart*

Jaslene laughed and so did he.

Temper:: So que paso mija?What is a beautiful hyna like yourself doing in this shithole?
Jaslene:: *smiled*I came with a friend.
Temper:: Really,who?
Jaslene::Guera.
Temper:: Guera?That's mi best homegirl!
Jaslene:: 0 hell nah,I'm about to trow some putasos.She's MY Best friend.
Temper:: Hate to break it to you baby,pero es la neta.

He smiled at her and so did she.They continued talking for un longass time.Parecia like they new eachother for a long time cuz,they just clicked you know.So after another hour Guera showed up with Lucky.She spotted Jaslene and noticed that Temper was all up on her.She walked up to them mad.

Guera:: Why are you talking to this baboso?
Temper:: Ey,ey.No calling names por favor.
Jaslene:: Because I want to*took another drink of her beer.The bitch was gone*
Guera:: Ay Jaslene,you haven't stopped drinking?
Jaslene:: Fuck no,you said you were gonna help me get the pain away,and this helped un chingo.Guera come here*pulled her to her*Tu sabes...sabes que te quiero?Your the only...the only person que I love at this point.You never let me down,that's why I love you.My best friend*hugged her tight*

Lucky and Temper laughed.

Guera:: Shut up,this isn't funny.Come on Jaslene we're leaving*pulled her off the seat*
Jaslene:: What?!NO!!!Why??
Guera:: I have to get you home it's late already.
Jaslene:: Ay it's early*sat back down*Aver Temper hand me another drink.
Temper:: Simon mija*handed her a beer*
Guera:: Chales ese*took it from her and gave it back to him*She's done for tonight.
Temper:: Let her Guera.She wants to let the pain go away*smiled and sat next to her*

Jaslene got closer to him and layed her head down on him.

Guera:: Look Temper,I know what your up to ok stupid?And let me tell you this now,this homita right here is not like the other putas you fuck.So don't try to act slick,cuz it ain't happening.
Temper:: I was just trying to be nice ey*put his arm around Jaslene*
Guera:: Well stop trying,we're leaving*pulled Jaslene up one last time*
Jaslene:: Cristy,I'm tired*yawned*
Guera:: I know,that's why I'm taking you home.
Jaslene:: 0k...
Guera:: Lucky can you help me get her in the car?
Lucky:: Simon.

Lucky picked up Jaslene in his arms and walked down the driveway to the car.He put her in the passenger side.As Guera started the car Temper walked up to Jaslene's side and knocke on the window.Jaslene looked at him all sleepy and smiled.She rolled down the window.

Jaslene:: Heeeeeyyyyy...Temper*laughed*
Guera:: *Rolled her eyes*Que quieres?
Temper:: Damn attitude.I just wanted to get her number esa.Chillax fuck.
Guera:: No,your not getting it.
Jaslene:: Your mean Guera..here it is Temper..(213)***-****
Temper:: *Programed it on his phone*0rale mija,I'll hit you up*kissed her in the cheek and walked away*
Jaslene:: See was that so hard?*hiccup!*Wooops!*laughed*

Guera shook her head and took off.Yegaron to Jaslene's house a while later.Guera helped Jaslene out the car and helped her walk to the house.Jaslene took out her keys and opened the door.

Guera:: Go to sleep chupitos.0k?*walked away*
Jaslene:: *mumbled*yea,yea

She closed the door and stumbled upstairs to her room.As soon as she got in she trew herself on her bed and knocked out...Zzzzzz
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